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Audition for :iconthecontestants:
Jennifer ref sheet: [link]

Speech bubbles with a lot of talking in them: I know you probrably hate them but I can't help it
Anyone get the last bit? Yknow when Her mum crys? If you dont, im trying to make it feel that by telling something with the mind feels even more important(?) than telling it out loud...if you still don't get it, don't bother then ^^"

part 2: [link]

Jennifer and Micheal and Mary and John-me
Eitan-:iconeitan606:
Glen-:iconzenrider:
The Contestants-:iconthecontestants:

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:iconmat-lee:
cool entry and character

will be fun to see her during the tournament

good luck

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:iconpetrotasia:
thank you so much!^^

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:iconstripeymistress:
I read the ref sheet. You actually have a great talent for drama, but make sure not to push it too much... especially with the "no happiness" thing. ^^; Even people who are clinically depressed smile and laugh sometimes. You need to find enough balance so we feel both sorry and admirable towards the character. It's hard to admire a character who's sad all the time.

You might also want to comb through this for grammar/punctuation, simple things like periods seem to have been avoided.

8) But, really, this is cute. I wish I had learned more about the character, but you've set up some great stuff. I hope you get in.
:iconpetrotasia:
thank you very much. I knew I should prove read it before submitting but I forgot. Im really bad at grammar but trust me, I DID improve...like A LOT! compares to what I wrote when I was in primary school..
ok...maybe I overdid the "sadness" parts but I actually have ideas for later on...if I actually get in. Y'see,(dont tell anyone but really, I dont mind) Im actually going to make her sadness go away bit by bit throughout the entries...dont know how yet though..thank you again.^^

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:iconstripeymistress:
That would be wonderful. <3 I'm a sucker for a sob story, but not if it's too heavy. :D
:iconpetrotasia:
^^glad that you didn't cry..(or did you?O.o...if so, I'm truly sorry!)

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:iconpetrotasia:
^^

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:iconloverofpiggies:
Cool, good luck in the tourney!

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